Wounded Wolf/Vision Commentary

Hello to all and sundry!
I took this REALLY rough excerpt from the NaNoWriMo novel that I started in '06. I reached the goal of over 50,000 words, but the novel was only near the mid-way point. I have started diving into it again.

Can we say, "ABSORPTION POINT," class?!?!?!?!?!?!

So, I apologize in advance, y'all... Write... Must write...

See you whenever I end up emerging from the "story-membrane." My cocoon is pretty thick...

Loves to all...


P.S. Believe it or not, not all of my writing revolves around blood being spilled... I just tend to be able to write these scenes a bit more coherently than the rest! :D

RE: "Cardinals in the Snow"

Well, that was a bit that I wrote this AM. As I drove home from dropping off a kiddo at school, I saw a cardinal swoop across the snowy sky into a clump of trees. It made me think of blood... I know that my brain does odd jumps now and then, but to a writer it makes perfect sense. That is all I have time for today, my Dears. Take care and please accept my humble apologies for not posting sooner.
Loves to all...

P.S. When I put a word in ( ) it is a word that I intend to replace with something more creative... Once I figure it out at least. :)